Year 5
Cheryl Moskowitz visiting Year 5 - Genghis Khan cinquain
This week, we had the pleasure of welcoming poet Cheryl Moskowitz back to George Spicer, as she visited Year 5 to support them with writing poetry. Each of the classes took part in a poetry workshop, where they each wrote cinquains about the life and legacy of Genghis Khan, as part of our unit, 'The Realm of the Khan.'
We began by discussing the legacy of Genghis Khan and discussed four key themes we have learnt about in our unit. In Anubis class, they focused on tolerance of religion, Thoth class focused on the written language, in Ra class they focused on the legal code (yassa) and In Osiris, they focused on the trade routes used by the Mongolian warriors and the importance of trade.
At the end of the day, we performed our epic poem in the hall, which each class sharing their theme. We combined all four class poems together as one, following the cinquain format. Read below and tell us what you think! Thank you again to Cheryl Moskowitz for joining us and continuing to encourage our love of poetry!
Supreme by Year 5
The Khan
Gruesome Warlord
Dweller, bringer of life
Cast his shadow upon the world
Genghis
I rule over you
But your religion is yours to keep
I cannot control your thoughts or your beliefs
You can have your religion of choice
But remember, I am your ruling voice
No one’s god is greater or inferior
But over every God, I am superior
We need our differences
We must learn to tolerate
Thoth’s Khan.
Brutal tyrant.
Destruction in his path,
Fireworks bursting from within,
Spirit!
So that we can remember,
Preserve and hold on to,
Look back at and pass on,
What we know.
Genghis Khan commissioned a language,
To be written and shared long ago,
Today we all know how to do it.
Vicious
Great overlord
Built links between nations
The ground beneath him quakes and alters
Wind strikes
The life of a nomad is everchanging and hard
From desert to grassland
From woodland to yard
I wove an invisible thread through the land
And brought people and cultures together
I brought bright coloured silk
And soft fur and hard leather
Porcelain from China
And gold brocade
Great One
Ferocious One,
Conqueror of all nations
Even the blood moon bows to him,
Tyrant.
Follow your leader,
Follow your master,
All MUST OBEY,
This is my Yassa!
Only believe in one god,
Be loyal.
No one should be slave, servant, or royal!
One rule for all - I insist on law and order.
Do not cross the line or you will be sent across the border!
Slaughter for those that are disobedient,
I am a hard ruler - I am NOT lenient.
Because.. I am the Great One
I am the ferocious One,
Conqueror of all nations
Even the blood moon bows down to me,
I am the wolf, warrior, leader, SUPREME.